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Review:AlexFan says:
That was interesting.

I quite like Daphne, she sounds very nice and motherly. She seems like someone who's always going to have a smile on their face and greet you warmly and make you feel better when you're having a bad day.

Good job on characterization. Astoria sounds interesting enough, the ending though made her even more interesting though, don't mind if I read onto the next chapter.

I think that your description of the Pink Hippogriff Cafe is great. I can really feel the hustle and bustle of the place and the warm feeling. I actually started smiling while reading this.

I actually want to visit the Pink Hippogriff Cafe now. Anyway, really well written chapter and good luck with the story!

Author's Response: Hey there!

Aww I'm glad you like Daphne! I do enjoy writing her, so it's great to hear that she seems likable! Glad I did Astoria justice too :P I hope you do read on!

Ahh it's great that the Pink Hippogriff came across well! I have such a clear picture of it in my head, it's good to know that other people like the idea too :)

Thankyou very much for taking the time to review!

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