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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

I'm really sorry that its taken me so long to get back to you and this really awesome story. I've actually been busy and it sort of sucks. Anyway, so I wasn't expecting anything like what happened in this chapter! I thought it was interesting that Pansy actually showed up (Ten minutes early. Hahah), I sort of wondered if she'd back out at the last minute. But she surprised me and I'm glad that she's reaching out a little, I think going to the pub was a good thing for her.
And I'm really glad to see that she was slowly, slowly, brought out of her shell. Her coworkers are really interesting too, I liked what you did with their dynamics and the way they were interacting. Pansy didn't seem to know how to react to it and I enjoyed watching her struggling and analyzing everything. Its really fascinating for me, I'm never sure what she's going to say or what she's going to do. If she'll make a mistake or not. I do like that the gang didn't invite Cyril, that wouldn't have been the best thing for her. But we found out alot about Terrence's relationship with his wife (Through Clive) and I'm glad that there wasn't any awkwardness with Pansy being there. Thank Goodness.
Also, I found her disregard for the blue-haired waitress a little funny. She's still a bit of a snob underneath it all.
And she got drunk!
Wasn't expecting that at ALL! Hahaha. It was hilarious and the way you wrote it was really good, I don't think I've read anything as funny in a while when it comes to drinking. Hahah.
But that ending has got me curious. What's going on with her mother? She'd mentioned her earlier on in the chapter but I got the sense that they were drifting apart. Even more than usual and the Manor is dark...and quiet. Are you going to elaborate on that soon? I hope so! Whenever you get less busy, please update for this! I'm a big fan! :D
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Hello again!

I surprised you? Haha- for me, there was never any doubt that she would show. (But, then again, I am the author and I am writing the story... I should know these things). And yes, she showed up early- think of her mortification if she had shown up late, of all things!

I'm glad that you noticed that she's being brought out of her shell. It's one of the running themes in this story for me and it's great when other people notice it. It's also great to hear that you liked the interaction in the pub. They are trying now to include Pansy more.

Yes, Pansy's still the same snob. I doubt she'll ever change that fundamentally.

Haha- she did get just a little bit tipsy. Oops. Poor Pansy- she's never been that vulnerable before other people before. I'm glad that you found it funny, though.

Yes, her relationship with her mother will be elaborated upon quite soon. In the next couple of chapters soon.

I'm so glad that you enjoyed this chapter and I look forward to seeing your review on the next one! (It's already up!)


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