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Review:potterfan310 says:
My jaw literally dropped and I screamed. It's the first time he's ever seen his daughter and all he can say is "She's grown." I want to hit him and tell him to pull it together.

On the other hand Grace, she is the most cutest thing ever! And I love her little elephant x Kiwi seems like a great mum. ♥

I can't believe there was no Cat in this chapter, but I'm starting to think either she and Tim have a little secret which she is trying to hide (I'm thinking she's either pregnant or has a baby) or she just wanted Oliver to go and try and make things up. But I could be wrong.

So hoping Cat's in the next chapter ♥ and I really can't wait to see what happens between Kiwi and Oliver!!! eek! ♥

11/10 ♥ ♥
Soph x ♥

Author's Response: HIT HIM! HIT HIM! *runs off to get popcorn*

Yes, Oliver is still a stubborn idiot.

Grace is so cute and so much fun to write, I'm glad you like her :)

I'll give you this much: knowing Cat, it's the second option. She likes throwing Kiwi and Oliver into awkward situations way too much!

Cat is back next, absolutely! THANK YOU FOR YOUR AWESOME REVIEW &hearts

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