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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
A rather interesting beginning! I think you've set up your original character rather well and have made this first chapter a great start! This chapter brought up questions about who this boy is, what he has to do with Dom and what is going to happen now that he has left England. And what exactly is that red gem that was so important for him to take? I guess only reading on will tell me. This story is so different from what I usually read (basically just romance) so this one caught my eye right away! I can't really say much though about how you are doing on the other genres as I dont have much experience with them but I would say that so far you have set up the mystery/action/adventure part of the story rather well. I think that this is a great beginning to your story and leaves your readers wanting to know more! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: Yay. I'm glad. I like when readers have questions, though do you mean Roxanne, not Dom? All questions shall be answered.

There will be romance in this story, a little. I don't think it's enough to put it as a genre, but I always write a little. But i'm glad you read it anyway, this is one of my favorite stories to write, with two of my favorite genres - horror and mystery. :D

Thank you so much for choosing to read this story. I hope you stay for more. :)

Sam.


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