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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hi this is your review from the Review Tag on the forum :)
I loved this one-shot as I don't really come across many where Narcissa is portrayed realistically. You can definitly imagine now, why she turned into who she is in the Harry Potter books. How she's so devoted to Draco that she's willing to let Voldemort lose. I always wondered why she did that so it's nice to have a backstory behind it now as well.

Just one tiny thing however the bit about how she said she lost her virginity before being married sort of confused me, as I had always imagined purebloods as ultra conservative in their views on premarital sex, well for women anyway! But, I don't think that takes anything from the story it's just me being Harry Potter nerd!

Overall I found the story really good as it flowed really well and it was really believable :) I would definitly read more of this story if there was more as I find Narcissa's persepective really intriguing :)

Author's Response: Hi!

Thanks for reading and reviewing. I am so happy to know that you liked this one-shot, and found the backstory of Narcissa plausible.

Hmm, well I always thought that pureblood or not, teenagers are always sort of rebellious and hormone-driven, and they wouldn't really care much about conservativeness. I wanted Lucius to be special for Narcissa, so I made him, her first :)

Thanks again for reading, and its good to know that you found this believable.

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