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Review:academica says:
Hi Sam! I feel like you're always updating and adding new stories and yet I never make it over to your page. So I'm here for the holiday review swap :)

I really like the tone of this first chapter. It think it matches up with the movie, that air of excitement and wonder and all the hope that could come with an adventure across the ocean to America. I think it's neat to imagine it coming from two young boys, and it'll be cool to see what they get into before everything goes south--as it unfortunately must :(

This seems like a small quibble, but I wasn't a huge fan of the names you chose. They seemed a little too informal to come from a stodgy pureblood family like the Notts. Nate, I guess, is a little different because he isn't actually their son. Jared and Anthony, though, just don't fit well for me. 'Ant' also isn't the nickname I would have chosen.

This is a good start, and I can only imagine how magic and the Titanic might collide. Great work!

Amanda

Author's Response: Hey, Amanda! Yeah, one day I'll stop writing everything down... No, probably not. :P

Yeah, we all know the ending to this story. Well, the ship anyway. It's a new thing for me to write, but I'm a Titanic nerd so fingers crossed I won't mess it up. :P

The names just seemed to fit in my head, when I imagined their characters. The nickname 'Ant', though, is actually there for a reason and would be the youngest brother's nickname no matter what. That'll come up in the next chapter.

Thank you very much for reviewing this. :)

Sam.


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