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Review:Roots in Water says:
Hello! I decided that I couldn't resist seeing what happened when Ron and Hermione met for the first time since the incident that separates them.

And oooh- it looks like they will be soon working closely together, now that Hermione's determined to learn the truth of her past! I wonder if their memories will start coming back as they spend time together or if there's some barrier between them and their memories that they have to unlock...

I really like how you're writing their perspectives. It's really fascinating to see how they almost remember each other... It's also frustrating. Ron almost remembers Hermione; Hermione almost remembers Ron. In particular I really enjoyed Ron's thoughts about how Hermione's name sounds familiar- "as though he had heard it hundreds of times"! I'm really looking forward to the moment where they do regain their memories (though I know I'm jumping ahead of myself here).

However, I do feel sorry for the people they will have to leave behind. I can already see Hermione breaking off her engagement with Jonathan (that was his name, right?) and it's sad because he probably feels better about their relationship than she does. He proposed to her, after all. At least Ron's friend in the store doesn't have too many romantic expectations.

I do wonder, though, how Hermione is a doctor. Even though she has the knowledge (I don't doubt that) I'm curious to know if she has the correct degrees. I know that, at least in my country, the process to becoming a doctor takes many years- much longer than just three years (about ten, I believe). Where did she get her qualifications from?

All in all, I really enjoyed this chapter and I'm really curious to see how Hermione will seek to learn the truth about her path. Great work! :D

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