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Review:Aphoride says:
Hey Helen! *waves* Thank you very much for the lovely review you left me! It was really, really nice - just wanted to let you know now, since I'm really terrible at replying to reviews.

Onto the main event - and wow! This is just amazing (but then, pretty much everything else I've read of yours is pretty really good). I love your choice of using Lavender as the main character - not that many people writer her, and when they do, it's generally as a cow who splits up Ron and Hermione so that Hermione can run off into the sunset with Draco... you know, that kinda thing.

But here... she's her own person, she's obviously developed, she's obviously changed through the whole war and her experiences... I mean, the war and then the battle is just so much in such a short space of time and you've conveyed it so well, with the mentions of Parvati and other victims in the Hospital and the scars (gah, the scars sounded terrifying! I feel so sorry for her!).

I love the point you've started it at, as well. It might have seemed weird to start with her about to leave the hospital, deemed 'cured' and 'better' and 'healthy' and all the rest of it, but it really, really works. Instead of focusing on her recovery within the Hospital, it's after and it's just such an interesting place to start. I'm so fascinated to see where you go with this! Seriously - I really hope she gets better so quickly and ends up being all right, possibly with a nice boyfriend *wink* but I know that it's not going to be an easy task and she's going to have a lot of bumps and knocks along the way. I just wanna know what happens and how it happens!

Also, major kudos for the mention of Augustus Pye! :D I lovelovelove it when people mention minor characters like that!

I will be back! ;)

Aph xx

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