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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
Wow talk about a rather intense opening chapter! I was captivated from the opening sentence all the way until the very last sentence, and quite honestly, I'm still captivated by this story. I want to know more! How is Severus Snape still alive and what does this mean? Whats going to happen next? Is Lorcan going to end up in trouble now that he found Snape? So many questions!

The description in this was wonderful and did such a great job of painting this picture for me! Your opening was perfect, it really made me wonder what was going to happen and how Lorcan's age and the fact that he wasn't any type of law enforcement person was going to have to do with this story and then I continued to read and found out and I'm still just in aw of this chapter! I could really go on and on about the description and how absolutely perfect it was with each new thing you described, but if I had to say one thing that I think you did the best describing it was the old man, or Severus Snape. It was just so perfect and mysterious and just AH, amazing!

So I'll stop rambling about that now and continue on with what I liked, which was just everything. The characterization of Lorcan was fun and different and so childlike (which of course he is) so it was just perfect! And then telling us at the very end that the old man is Severus was just like, wait what?!

This first chapter has done everything that it really should, introduce your characters, set up a plot, and get me interested to read more. I can tell you now that I will be back to read more, if not soon then sometime for sure! This is going on my HPFF must read list! So if you couldn't tell already, I really enjoyed this chapter! Great Job!


Author's Response: Thank you for such an amazing review. I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter. Description can be so hard to get right, so it's such a nice treat to hear that you liked it. It was fun to imagine what Snape would look like in his sixties or seventies, especially from the point of view of a child.

And I'm so glad the chapter worked to grab your attention. This story was always meant to by a mystery, so it's good to know readers are walking away with questions already.

Thank you again for such a lovely review. I really appreciate it so very much :)

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