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Review:SilentConfession says:
Hi LilyFire!

Lovely work here, i think it really sets up your story well and grabs the readers interest. It makes me really sad because there's Felicity and she's so in like with Lorcan and i just feel so bad for her because she'll have to watch her best friend with him. (it made me think... is Lorcan helping Lily with Herbology really 'helping' or is it a snogging session? ;p)

The beginning made me laugh and her little pep talk to herself. It really helped us connect to her as a character and let us see a bit of who she is. Even though this is a really short chapter i feel like you've done a really great job at giving a lot of detail. For one, we know she's guarded with her emotions (not telling her best friend of her feelings and she's shy because she's liked him for ages and she hasn't been able to tell him yet).

Anyway, i like the start you have here! You've done a great with introducing your characters and the main idea behind you plot. I'd love to see some more description but i'm sure that will come in future chapters! Good luck!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really happy that you liked it!

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