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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
First of all I really want to say that I enjoyed your characterization of Rose and the rest of her family very much! I like that it wasn't Rose trying to convince the others to crash Roxannes party but Molly who is usually seen as the more quiet, book type. I just thought that doing this added something more to your story that sets it apart from others by using these characterzations. I only found one small mistake and it was here, "I blushed a deeply; I now resembled a lobster in a wig." the first a is extra. Other than that though I didn't notice anything else that needed to be fixed. The flow of the chapter was wonderful and it was just a wonderful read. I thought that the characterization was really the best part of this all though just with it being so different, it added a whole new layer which was really fun to see. I like the idea of the cousins not all getting along as well as it is rather hard to get along with them all all the time. I look forward to reading more! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

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