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Review:LovlyRita says:
Oh my goodness, what a lovely story! It is so nice to see a story that is focused on Seamus and his life, I feel like there aren't a lot of those out there.

This was beautifully written, the flow and the pace were perfect, and your descriptions were spot on. I loved the emotion in this piece as well, the way that Seamus waits for the letter, and then has to wait and wait to ask the question. It was very humorously done too, which can be difficult in fluffy pieces to pull off correctly without seeming gratuitous, but this was very artfully done.

And Ava is so typical of a young woman, just talking constantly about whatever comes to her mind, not paying total attention to the...ahem...issue at hand. Poor Seamus didn't get the words out the way he wanted but it had the same effect anyway!

Of course the adult in me died a little when I saw he had bought a ring he couldn't afford, I'm like no! But, then, I do understand how those things go :)

Overall I think this piece was brilliantly written and I really enjoyed it :)

LR

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the amazing review! Your comments are making me blush:)
Seamus has always been one of my favourite characters and I thought that he needed a bit of love.
Oh Seamus, and the very expensive ring! Somehow, I can just imagine him buying something he can't afford.
I'm glad you enjoyed it, it means a lot!
Courtney:)

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