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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Hey there!
Before I happened upon this in the holiday review thread, I had actually been meaning to read it, but really hadn't had the time. I really regret that now, because this chapter was amazing! Seriously, you have an almost perfect writing style that drew me in from the very first sentences.
I love your characterization of Pansy, and the description of Parkinson Manor-I am excited to learn more about the way she lives and the way she grew up.
I enjoyed the small mention of Astoria-possible foreshadowing for what is to come? I also thought you portrayed Milly the house elf really well-you got the way house elves speak to the T.
I will absolutely be reading on to find out more.

Author's Response: Hello! I'm so glad that you finally had the time to read this and review it! Pansy's a minor character so it's always great to hear that people are interested in reading this story.

I'm really pleased that you like my characterization of Pansy as I'm trying to do a very careful balancing act with it (not making her seem overly smart while also writing her like a Slytherin). And yes, that's possible foreshadowing. :)

:D I'm so, so, so happy that you enjoyed this chapter, especially the writing style. Thank you!

I hope that you continue to enjoy it as you read more of the chapters!

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