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Review:FriendofMolly says:
Jet,
The picture of just what Almost Happily Ever After looks like is everchanging and fascinating. Hannah and Angelina are the example that Magic doesn't keep from having the same complications that Muggles have. Yet it only opens those who accept it to greater happieness. I can't wait for the next. Harry and Ginny at Hogwarts as a married couple. And just how Ron will try to circumvent the rules to be with Hermione.
FoM
PS I don't know if I should leave my review at just one site, or both. I just might cut and paste at both. ?

Author's Response: It is always delightful to hear from you!

I would love to have a cut and paste review at both sites. Many different readers, and the sites handle reviews differently. I know that when I am looking for stories to read I do look at the number of reviews to see if it is worth looking at, so you help me get readers by reviewing.

As you might have noticed we have a Irish Beta helping LadymBlack and me keep from being TOO American. He is going over chapters, and what looks like a new chapter on HPFF is just re-posting of an old chapter with his mostly minor corrections. The only thing that may be a change in the story is having Harry get real picky about people calling Tom Riddle by his given name and not Lord Voldemort.

I have just re-read all the Potter books and my story, and LadymBlack is re-reading then with her usual thoroughness. We will get back to posting new chapters eventually. Meanwhile I'm way ahead, on the second story.

One thing almost all the authors I have read seem to agree on is that Fred comes first, and Fred comes less than 9 months after his parents wedding. "She began to wait and worry, so we wedded in a hurry." I'm not sure why. Northumbrian thought he was being original!

Ron and Hermione are going to have some issues with McGonagall. I think you will like how they are resolved. I wrote about Ron and Hermione's wedding in the new version of the story.

I think the new version is much richer than the old one. Hopefully Im learning. Always good to hear from you.

JetLaBarge


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