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Review:Toujours Padfoot says:
I've reviewed the first two chapters of this story already, so with the swap I have returned for the third!

I enjoyed this chapter. It was relieving to see that Draco hadn't taken advantage of a golden opportunity to publicly embarrass Hermione, sparing her further mortification when she's already in such a bad way. Speaking of which, I like how you handled her grief. She's upset, but she's still strong and reasonable, which I'm pleased to see because that's canon Hermione all the way. I particularly appreciated this bit:

It seemed that my classmates had grown accustomed to me answering the questions because nobody else even tried answering them, not even when I waited a minute before raising my hand.

- I can't even imagine being in a class with Hermione. It would be one part annoying because she would constantly be trying to answer every question, and one part nice because one could more easily daydream or slack off or whatever without worrying about participation because Hermione basically participates enough for everyone. It was good to see that she was still Hermione, popping up her hand to answer questions simply because it was ingrained behavior, and that she approached making Ron jealous in a calculating, level-headed way. I smiled to myself when she asked Cormac purely because he would make Ron angrier than any other guy - which was one of my favorite moments in HBP, so it was fun to see that played out here.

Good job! :)

Author's Response: I must say that your reviews really make my day! Knowing that someone who is a great author such as yourself can come along to my story and enjoy it and think that i'm doing a great job with it is just an amazing feeling! I know this may have only been for the review swap but it still makes my day to see a review from you because I know that you are such a high caliber author and to have you looking over my work will only help to make me become a better author myself! I'm so glad that you found Hermione spot on and enjoyed the bit about her still raising her hand all the time. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I do hope that you come back!

~Slytherinchica08~

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