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Review:Ever says:
Hey, I'm here from the holiday review swap!

This pairing automatically attracted me! There's something about the unusual ships that I've always been fascinated with. Kudos to you for attempting one of the craziest ships I've ever seen..and successfully hypnotizing, forgive me for the lack of a better term, with such a plot and ship.

First off, this beginning chapter automatically hooked me. I want to know so much, and I hope you'll elaborate in further chapters. You've introduced the story in a way that makes me sit on the edge of my seat and also makes me desperately need to read more.

I really want to know more about this scandalous affair! And how Ron reacted to it, oh lordy!

I think your imagery is gorgeous! Well...hm. The amount you have and the thought put into is grgeous. But the thought of Viktor looking likes he's been drug through hell isn't! But the imagery and descriptions you had really brought the scene to life!

Excellent job and happy holidays! (I'll be back, I NEED to finish this story)

Author's Response: Thank you, Ever! You're right, it is a pretty odd pairing. Hopefully I've done enough to make it believable. I always enjoy reading stories with unusual ships, and it's been a lot of fun to create my own here. And I'm so glad you enjoyed the descriptions. This was just meant to be a short, intro chapter, so the narrative was a lot lighter than in future chapters, but I'm glad it seemed to read okay.

And yes, lots more scandal to come...and even a few appearance by Ron and Hermione.

Thank you so much for the review!


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