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Review:wytchkitty13 says:
Hello It's wytchkitty13 from the holiday review swap :)

I like this because it give a more detailed account of exactly what happened with Sirius when he got inside of Hogwarts stalking Pettigrew.

This was very nicely detailed, like we're right there going through the scene with Sirius.
The way you started it out with his dog form and then back to his wizard form and then when he went on the hunt for Pettigrew was really nicely done. It was smooth and flowy. :)
Great job on this story, it reminded me how much I missed the third book and the little things that are to be recognized and appreciated!

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you for stopping by and reviewing my one-shot! =)

I'm really glad you liked it. I rarely touch canon events, but I felt that this particular scene was worth writing from Sirius's point of view.

I love PoA as well, it's probably my favorite of all Potter books. So it's good to hear that my rendition did it justice.

Happy holidays! =)


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