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Review:Mystique says:
This was such a beautiful one-shot. In such a short amount of words you really captured what Ginny and Harry must have been feeling during that year.

I really liked that you chose to write in second person, there aren't that many stories on HPFF written in that style. But I find that when a story written in second person is really well written, it makes me enjoy reading it even more.

I love how there is so much restlessness between both characters and in a way I think that is that restlessness which joins Harry and Ginny together. And you've characterized both of them so well. In many fanfictions that I have read, Ginny is portrayed as a strong fiery redhead who is constantly performing the Bat Bogey Hex. But in this story, you showed that she can hurt and that she has emotions like any other person.

Charlie

Author's Response: Thank you for being willing to review this for me! I'm very happy that you enjoyed it, too -- I used to be very fixated on word counts, but a story doesn't have to be told in three thousand word increments, you know?

I love writing in second person, too, and I actually think it's my favorite point of view to write in (though, of course, it would be a bit of a challenge to really write a novel in it). I'm all about increasing the number of second-person stories here! :)

I'm normally not a fan of Harry/Ginny, but writing them here felt right. And again, I'm so glad it worked for you! Thank you for reviewing this for me, and for saying such complimentary things. I hope to see you around very soon! ♥


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