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Review:hannnahgracr says:
Hey, it's hannnahgracr with your requested review. Sorry it has taken me a bit longer than expected to get to this.

I really liked the beginning and end sections, they had a real element of mystery to them. Both bits were really interesting and drew me in.

I think the middle section could have been a bit more interesting. I think it could have a bit more flare and punch to it, perhaps more dramatic or mysterious. I felt it was a bit of a let down after your really good introduction. It did make sense however.

For a challenge, it was very well written though. Characterisation was good especially in the beginning and the end bits.

I hope you found this review slightly helpful :-)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! It was my first attempt at an action scene and I did it on the spot, so I'll be sure to work on those when I have more time to get things more interesting. This was really helpful, and don't worry about timing! I used to do reviews and I know how hard finding time for them can be! *squish*

Annie


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