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Review:CherryBoom says:
I like Stacy and her straight shooter personality. It's interesting to see Scorpius's ex-girlfriends and how they act around him. Clearly he has usually ended relationships on good terms, maybe partly because he seems to try to avoid disturbing the balance in his own life at any cost.

The idea that the kid would write letters to home, so that his parents wouldn't divorce, is quite sad. Then again, I guess if Draco would've suddenly become a happy-go-lucky family guy after the war, it would be a really far-fetched idea. I like how you paint an interesting family picture of the Malfoys for us, but that it's real with difficulties and not just glossed over.

The best part of this chapter was definitely Scorp's and Dom's discussion. The snarkiness and sarcasm practically dripped off from my screen. =) And I love that Scorp tries to fend for himself. He should do it more often.

I find it interesting that Rose avoids Scorpius. Hmm... Speculations.

The pace was very good in this chapter. I like your way of writing long, detailed conversations that I can imagine anyone having in real life. There were some misspelled words and such, but it didn't bother me much.

I'm starting to really dig this fic. I'll put it in my favorites, so I can see when you update it again. =)

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