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Review:Ron 4 Hermione says:
Hey there! :)

Poor Sirius he really is treated badly but I'm glad he at least tried to speak up to his dad when he felt that he shouldn't spoke the team. I like the contrast between the brothers that you've drew on, the rooms being decorated differently, the way they dress and even the way the house elf treats them. It's interesting that everything is affected because of the house they are in.

I am curious as to where this is going becuase for a Snape/Lily and James/Lily story, this is an odd place to start. Not odd in a bad way, more an intreging I wonder why lets read on way! :)

It's written well, and I love your descriptions. It really feels like I can see the house, the room and the people interacting. It's very nicely done! Great job!

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for swapping with me :)

I'm glad you like seeing those differences between Regulus and Sirius, and that the contrast is evident in multiple ways. I didn't want to go the cliched route and make it a downright abusive household; instead, I wanted to make Sirius seem unwelcome in more subtle ways, like with his dad.

Well, the ships are a big part of the story (specifically Lily's part), but the major theme here is a budding friendship between Regulus and Lily. I think you'll see more of that if you read on -- and I hope you do! I'm glad that this opening chapter piqued your interest!

Thanks for your very kind review!

Amanda


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