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Review:SilentConfession says:
Hullloo! Thanks for stopping by my holiday review swap! It's been ages since i've seen this story! 19 Chapters! Holy moley!

I really enjoyed this chapter! It was really powerful and i loved how all the canon events played perfectly in with your story. It seemed like each event added to this sub story you've created about Brienne and co. It's just really neat to see that because it feels so real.

It was a really good move on your part because it fit really well with her growing anxiety and you can really feel her hysteria and paranoia here. It would take a big moment like this (Sirius breaking in) to push those emotions so much that she's forced to tell people about her situation. I'm really glad she did but it leaves me as the reader on the edge of my set wondering how they are going to react to this secret!

Another thing i appreciated about this chapter was how you captured the bigger picture here. it wasn't just focussed on Brienne and her friends but also you could see that other members of the house are looking for their family members or best friends etc. It gave us something new to see that the HP books didn't really cover themselves and how everyone else was affected by the break in.

I love the growing tension between Brienne and George. It's like this simmering pot that's ready to boil any minute :D But you're doing such a great job at pacing the story's romance and still keeping the story interesting.

Great job with this! I'm so pleased i was able to read the new chapter! :P

Author's Response: Hi! :D Aw, thanks for returning the review!

I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter, I know it's kind of emotionally heavy at the end, so I'm glad it's not anticlimactic or anything like that xD

Thanks again!

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