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Review:AC_rules says:
Hullo there Amanda!

So, a very long time ago I read the first chapter of this story and fell in love with your pretty descriptions and added it as a favourite, and then very promptly because very busy and never read any further. Which I'm currently really regretting because this chapter was full of really really lovely descriptions as well, and it was a real pleasure to read this.

First off, you definitely manipulated my feels A LOT in regards to talking about how much Lily liked Halloween. That was really, really rather cruel and you should be ashamed of yourself for making me feel so. But all the little bits about Autumn were lovely too, and in the idea that Lily would think about being a witch before she knew was was lovely... I'm just imagining her little snippets of magic and this little kid just thinking she was deluding herself and such.

And then we have the Marauders, whom I'm a little bit in lover with, and I really liked the characterisation of all of them and how smoothly you introduced these characters. Particularly after seeing Sirius in the last chapter (which I reread before getting back to this) and how he comes across here, ack. I just loved that it was really lovely.

So basically, this was a lovely chapter that I enjoyed very much. And I should think I'll be back quite soon :)


Author's Response: Hi AC! I'm glad to see you back here for the swap, and I hope you continue past this point :)

Haha, I liked the opening to this chapter. It was cute to imagine Lily as a little girl dressing up like a witch and 'pretending' to do magic. Think she had any accidents back then? If so, she probably just thought her eyes were playing tricks on her. Very cute.

I'm glad you like how I've characterized the boys! I stressed a lot about it because I know they've been cliched to death and I didn't want to mess it up. Hopefully, if you do read on, you'll enjoy watching them grow together.

Thanks again for this very sweet review :)


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