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Review:Jchrissy says:
Hi darling! Yay for Christmas review swaps!

Okay so I must've read this sometime ago without reviewing because I definitely remember it. I'm so happy to have gotten the chance to read it again and am clearly reviewing this time ;)

I like the start of it. Making yourself look like an idiot because you're trying a bit of beautification is something I'm sure most girls can relate too. It took me forever to get the smokey eye look down without looking gothic :P although pink hair is a bit harder to get rid of..

And now I'm going to puke. The idea of pulling out vomit covered socks from nearly six months ago.. That's terrible. Absolutely terrible. I can understand why the house elves won't even touch them! I like your choices if characters so far and I really hope we see Fleur soon! I love writing her to pieces, so obliviously I love reading about her as well! But in really excited that your doing a story focusing in her children, because that doesn't happen nearly enough.

Seeing Dom smitten with someone is such a lovely change of pace!! I wonder of Louis will have the same sort of attitude in a relationship or if he'll be a big more head strong...

I hope you continue this, m'dear! This was a lovely first chapter.

Oh and I apologize for any random errors, I wrote this on my iPhone and it auto corrects the stupidest things!

Author's Response: Hi sweetie! So glad you stopped by. =)

I guess every girl can identify with some kind of beauty crisis. Heavens know, I have had plenty of those myself as well. =)

We will definitely see Fleur very soon, she's in the third chapter, and we will see her and Bill quite frequently. I love their children. I guess it's not as cool to have a veela and a cursebreaker as parents as it is to have one or two who saved the Wizarding World, but I definitely like them. Plus there will be some McLaggens in future chapters as well. Can you imagine Cormac as a daddy? =P That should be super fun!

We will see what will happen to kids... ;)

Thank you for the review! And happy holidays! =)

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