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Review:ScarletEye158 says:
Aw this was adorable :) I've never read a Viktor/Fleur story before (I'm more of a cannon lover) but I really liked this! You had some wonderful characterization is this story between Viktor and Fleur and it was nice to see how you envisioned their personalities because I don't read many fanfictions about them at all!

You also did really well with all the rest of the characters, especially Hermione and Ginny :) Ginny's sarcastic comment was just perfect and totally her :p I liked how you had Hermione still being friends with Viktor even though it was obvious Ron didn't like it. Don't get me wrong, I'm a die-hard Ron/Hermione shipper, but Hermione definitely should be able to decide her own friends and I'm glad you stuck to that (:

Also, another thing I wanted to tell you was that I loved all of your description! Right from the get-go I was met with lovely descriptions of Viktor's nerves and how he compared them to Quidditich. That was definitely a perfect way to describe what he was feeling! I also really liked the description you put into the kiss scene. I was a little disappointed when Harry interrupted them, being like, "Could you have any worse of timing, Harry?" but then Fleur came in and saved the day and made me all happy(:

Anyways, I really liked this and I'm glad I went to your review swap and decided to read it! Keep writing, you're really good at it! :D

-Amanda

Author's Response: Thanks! :) I'm a huge canon lover myself, so it was a bit of a weird one to write (It was a present for someone, as well, so more nerve-racking than usual), but Fleur and Viktor are such lovely characters. I always wanted to know more about them... we don't see nearly enough of them in books, in my opinion!

I was so worried about Hermione and Ginny so thank you so much for saying that! I'm always nervous writing the trio et al, because they're such established characters, you know? And yes, Hermione has every right to choose her friends, and Ron is a bit of an idiot about it, haha.

Thank you! I've always loved writing description (usually too much of it, tbh...) and it was a bit weird since Viktor in the books is pretty stoic and scowls at lot, lol. Yeah, Harry really is the King of Bad Timing, I think. I thought about making it someone else... like Hermione or Roger Davies or someone.. but Harry just suited it so well... poor Harry. Fleur is just a boss. 'Nuff said ;)

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it and thank you for reviewing (sorry for the incredibly late response!)!

Aph xx

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