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Review:TenthWeasley says:
I confess: Writing was coming a bit slow to me tonight. I wrote about 350 words and got so distracted I gave up. But I wanted to read just one more chapter before bed, and so here I am, yawns and all!

This was one of the best first-years-going-to-Hogwarts chapters I can ever remember reading. It seemed very canon, too, and I have no qualms about assuming that this is canon! Not a lot of people can tap into that; it's really awesome to see that you can. I like Fee more and more, the more I read about her, and I like the bond she already has with Alphard (who already seems very much like someone who would leave gold to the likes of Sirius). Again, I'm just floored by the detail you've put into creating the Black family. And I loved your take on the Sorting Hat's song -- I wrote a version myself once, though never used it, and they're tough!

I'm going to guess here that the letters at the end of this chapter, and the previous one, are from Fee's mum? I thought maybe they were from Tom, or Alphard, but of course that doesn't fit here anymore. I guess I'll have to wait and find out. ;)

Honestly, I cannot remember the last time I was so excited about reading on with a fan fiction story. I'm pleased to have caught this one early enough to ride the wave of chapter updates, because I am very determined to make you finish this story -- I already love it! ♥ For a long time now, I've had this feeling that I was becoming too discriminate in my fic tastes. I used to read without prejudice, just because something sounded interesting, and I'm slowly trying to get more into that mode now.

So, long story short -- update very soon, and I'll more than likely pop over during tomorrow's government lecture to continue on! :D Keep up the really great work!

Author's Response: I seriously cannot stop screaming internally at all of your awesome comments! I'm swooning over the fact that you think SYP is "one of the best first-years-going-to-Hogwarts chapters I can ever remember reading". Yes, I was theorizing on why Alphard would leave gold to Sirius knowing the consequences, and decided it was because he saw a younger version of himself in his nephew.

The Sorting Hat was so hard to write! I ended up looking up all three songs that were from the books (no wonder JKR wrote 3 instead of 6/7; she must have found them a nightmare!) and blending them, then altering one or two of the words so they'd fit better, as well as adding my own words. To be honest, the song itself took almost as long as the chapter to write. I'm so glad it was successful, because it will be quoted in future chapters. :D

Yes, I'm afraid you'll have to wait. :P

WHAT?! *dies of happiness* ♥ I WILL finish this story, although I wouldn't object to a cheerleader. ;)

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