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Review:Toujours Padfoot says:
Awww, I'm so glad he didn't dump her! That would have made a horrible memory of Graduation day. I was getting worried by the way he was phrasing things, almost like he was saying goodbye. And then when Tonks was mentally going over their relationship - particularly how she spoke of him to friends and family, that it already sounded like she was recalling his memory rather than something present - I was starting to get truly anxious.

There's something very sweet about the Charlie/Tonks pairing. They both seem like such down to earth people, playful and good-hearted and honest, and I really like how you portrayed them here. They seem like a real couple. They have communication issues, but I can tell that they fit really well together (or at least, they do right now, at the beginning of the story). I don't have high hopes of how well their relationship will stand the test of time, simply because of the story title! It feels like the beginning of a love once good that turns very rocky. Which is natural, since they're out on their own now and will grow more into themselves. Hogwarts preserves things that don't always go together, it seems, just because it's there and something of a faraway paradise where bad things are for places far beyond the castle.

So Tonks and Charlie, realistically, don't know the first thing about their relationship right now because they haven't been granted the freedom yet to explore it independently from other people.

Oh my goodness, who is this Ashton? I know that Ashton is a unisex name, so I'm hoping it's a man. But the airy voice and 'slender' description tells me it's probably a female. Which I do not like at all. A FEMALE ROOMMATE. THIS DOES NOT BODE WELL. I'd like to see Tonks give her the old one-two.

Overall, excellent first chapter!

Author's Response: Ahhh. I'm trying *really* hard not to melt right now.

Hahaha your thoughts on Ashton... loved them. She isn't terrible, not a 'I'm going to take him away from you' type of girl. But when my fiance and I were still dating doing long distance, he had this friend... a VERY nice, sweet, awesome girl that wasn't some sort of man taker. I really liked her. But the fact that she got to spend a lot of time with my boyfriend that I didn't because I was hundreds of miles away always really ate at me. And I can imagine it doing that to anyone, so even if they aren't intentional, Ashton will definitely cause problems.

I think Charlie and Tonks *really* want to make it work. This does end canon, but it won't be for the lack of them trying..

Okay. I don't even know how to respond to this without sounding like an idiot. I couldn't even respond to your message because everything I said sounded too silly :P. So I'm just going to stop now and tell you thank you ♥


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