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Review:KCKibbles says:
Alright, well here's my review for the review tag thing. I think this is my first time reviewing anything on this site. I decided to review this chapter because it looked like it needed love :P (I read the others too, don't worry)
It must be terrible to be close twins like Fred and George. Pretty much everything you do is going to be a constant reminder. You made that really clear.
I wasn't sure whether or not to laugh at the way George was acting during the funeral because of the Grimbly. In a way, I suppose I was embarrassed and felt sorry for him at the same time; it was just sad . I actually cringed throughout the whole scene after he got up and said, "Actually there is no need for this." You made me feel for the character and I'm pretty sure that's a good thing.
That's pretty much all I have to say. Overall I enjoyed it.

Author's Response: Hello there! Thank you so much for your review, and wow! Thanks for taking the time to read all THREE chapters! I hope it wasn't too laboured a read for you. Your comments really made my day and I am so happy that you actually cringed! OK, this sounds a little wrong, but I wanted to make the reader uncomfortable with this scene, and I am not the type of writer who insulates my characters, or protects them too much. I'm glad you empathized enough with George to feel this discomfort! And this scene is meant to be sort of ridiculous (grimbly ha!) at the same time, there's all that grief. So I'm very glad to hear all your reactions. It means I did something right, woo!

Thanks so very much once again for reviewing! I know you put a request in my thread; I'll get down to your story within the next few days!

-teh

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