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Review:TenthWeasley says:
Hello! I'm sorry for the slight delay in getting this review to you, as promised -- yesterday turned out to be a bit more hectic than I'd anticipated, and it's only now that I've found time to sit down and read this.

I love the Every Word Counts challenge, and consequently love reading other entries people have submitted into it! (I think at this point I've done four or five of my own.) The succinctness of the piece really does you well in this, too -- there's a terseness about it that almost juxtaposes the depression of the break-up. And I think one of the things I like most about it is the notion of the circle, when really your story actually comes full circle and thus becomes stylistically significant. The emotions carried across very well, and yet underlying it all was a sort of detached feeling: Gia's aware of the circle, and knows it'll continue to makes its loops.

You have a really good grasp of the mechanics of writing, too, which I always love seeing! I won't necessarily not read something sprinkled with typos and missed commas, but it's always appreciated to see a polished story, too; you obviously spent a long time on this, and it shows.

Very well done! This really is a good start for your very first story on the archives, and I'm glad you asked me to take a look at it. Keep it up -- you've got lots of promise! :)

Author's Response: Aaaah, thank you so much for your review. It gave me the boost I really needed.

When I first saw the Every Word Counts challenge, I instantly knew that it was for me because I love writing but never have hours to dedicate to it.

Also the idea of every word holding significant meaning makes me feel like Thomas Hardy or D.H Lawrence :D

Thanks for reading and writing such a lovely review and I'd love to read your take on the EWC challenge :D

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