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Review:CassiePotter says:
Hello! This was the first sing fic I've ever read, and I quite liked it! I think you picked really nice lyrics to go with the chapter!
I really enjoyed this, it was really interesting to read Narcissa's thoughts before going to Spinner's End to see Snape, because I've always wondered about that. I think you wrote both Narcissa and Bellatrix really well, and they were very much in canon. Your descriptions were also really nice to read. I could picture everything happening, especially in the first part of the chapter when you talked about the cream sofa.
There were a few grammar things I noticed, though, but they can easily be fixed.
When you say women, it should be woman if you're talking about a single person.
"On this particular night her and Lucius were stood with the Dark Lord" should be "On this particular nigh, she and Lucius stood with the Dark Lord"
"She had to stop listing to him, stop following his stupid irresponsible actions and protect her and Draco." should be "She had to stop listing to him, stop following his stupid irresponsible actions, and protect herself and Draco."
Those were the only things I really noticed. I thought this story had a good flow and pace to it, and it was really enjoyable to read! 9/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: Hey, I'm glad you thought the lyrics fit, I wasn't too sure!
Thanks for the CC, I'll go back and edit when I get the time!
I'm glad you liked it and thanks for the review! :)

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