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Review:silvertongue says:
I very much like the condept of this. However, I feel like the writing style is very rushed. Take your time. Explain yourself. Add detail. IT will do wonders for this story. Also, you said that Wonderland belonged to C.S. Lewis, when in fact it belongs to Lewis Carrol. Be careful on that one! I might stick with this one for a bit, so please keep my advice in mind and keep writing! This is a very creative idea and I love it.

Author's Response: Thank you silvertounge for the CC I will try to slow down and explain a bit more. I just try to make my stories a faster pace because the longer they are the more I just ramble and add word vomit.. I ALWAYS confuse Lewis Carrol and C.S. Lewis! I'll go find and fix that. Thanks for saying you'll stick with this and I'll try to get the ball rolling on this story again.
XOXOX,
LLG


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