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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
So I'm really wondering about this Professor, is he really who he says he is, or does he have a different agenda? Remus seems to be very cautious around him and unsure which in turn makes me unsure of his motives. I loved seeing more of Remus and Addy in this chapter though! I think that you have her done wonderfully with a bit of an airy attitude but then also very smart, pretty much exactly like Luna! I'm also wondering what happened in Snape's life that makes it hard for him to be around a Dementor because we know that he can do the spell and you would think that he would have plenty of happy moments with Lily but apparently something else trumps all of that! I still feel bad for Remus though that he can't do his and ends up passing out each time but it is rather understandable what with his own horrors that haunt his life. I can't imagine being five years old and waking up in St Mungos to hear your parents falling apart because you are now a werewolf. As always, I look forward to the next chapter! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: Hmm...possibly! You'll have to wait and see. Remus is right to be cautious, though, because they've had some really awful DADA professors in the past.

I'm very happy you like the way I've done Addy. She's hard to do because I have to make her similar to Luna, yet different at the same time, because Luna wouldn't be an exact copy of her mother.

Snape's awful childhood and issues with Lily are the reason he can't produce a patronus very well. He will eventually learn to do it properly, and learn that his happy moments with Lily can trump the bad ones.

Remus really does have some awful memories, but he will eventually overcome them and successfully produce a patronus. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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