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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
Oh Yay finally I get to see more Adeline! I thought that that was so sweet that she just got up from her studying spot and went and joined him, though she is a bit of an odd person, has the same air to her as Luna does which I'm assuming is what you were going for. I felt so bad for Remus that he ended up pasing out but it also adds a bit more to him and how he knew what Harry needed after he passed out on the train. I'm loving your Remus! I think that he is a great character and one that is hard to do because of the whole werewolf thing you would think he would be a bit bitter with himself and friends for having the lives that they do have and I could see that in here with James especially and how he says that James has an easy life. I loved the ending though! It was just so sweet and I think the perfect touch. I also like how you start out each chapter with Remus and Luna and her asking a bit about her mother. I think its touching. Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: Indeed! The moment finally came! Addy is definitely an odd person, which is where Luna gets it from (and from her dad), and it was intentional. But Addy's oddness is going to help Remus, even if it's as small a thing as studying next to him.

Remus's difficulties with the patronus are what caused him to be able to help Harry so much, at least in this. I'm really glad you like my Remus! He is hard to write, because it's easy to overdo or under-do the werewolf thing. I'm glad you like the beginnings, too. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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