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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
So the Death Eaters are finally being figured out, though I was wondering if you have it so that they are not using the dark mark then when they kill someone or does that begin to come later after they are found out? I thought this was a great chapter and really enjoyed reading it! I like that this story already has a bit of action going on what with the Death Eaters and everything and wondering who could be one around them. I felt bad for Sirius though as he knew that his family would support something like this but then deny's that his brother would ever be involved with it. The chapter seemed to flow really well and I couldn't spot any mistakes so great job on that. Altogether this was a great read and I look forward to reading the next chapter! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: I think canon was pretty vague on the timeline for when the Death Eaters started making themselves known and when they started using the Dark Mark. I haven't found a conclusive answer on that.

I'm glad you liked the chapter! I wanted to put the action in fairly early on, because the war had already started at this point. Sirius coming to terms with his brother as a Death Eater is his main plot in this story. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)


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