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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
The nice thing about this chapter for me, was that while its a nice sized chapter, over 3000 words, it took no effort to read at all! It really just flowed so well and I didn't feel like the chapter was dragging either. I thought the characterization of Remus was splendid as well what with him being worried about the future and knowing that he is going to have a harder time of it than his friends. I also liked that James and Lily are already getting along and that their relationship isn't going to be like what i've read many other times where she hates that Dumbledore has him as a Head but can get along and work with him and he did mention something about a second date so that must mean that they did go out during their sixth year! The ending for this chapter was also great as it makes me want to continue reading along to find out what it is that Dumbledore has to tell the prefects and staff. I'm also excited to find out who this Adeline is and just how big of a role she comes to have in Remus's life. If I'm correct, I'm thinking that maybe she is Luna's mom. I look forward to reading the next chapter! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked the flow! I worry about that with my longer chapters (although I do try to keep them fairly consistent, around 3500). I imagine Remus would've been pretty preoccupied with the future, especially in his 7th year, and that seems to be glanced over in so many fics. I'm glad you liked it!

I could probably write a novel-length rant on all the things I dislike about most Marauders fics, the James/Lily drama being one of them. I think that's why I wrote this fic; I wanted to write one that wouldn't include any of my pet peeves about the era. Plus, the James/Lily drama would've taken away from the Remus stuff. And JKR said that they started to get along at the end of 6th year, if I'm remembering right.

I'm really glad you liked the beginning! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! :)


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