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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
I really liked this oneshot! I've written a oneshot about this time for Neville as well, though its not posted yet, and I always find it interesting to see how others have this time written! I loved how this is what brought him to the RoR! Also the best part for me was that Theodore helped him leave, I have a small soft spot for Theo though I'm not sure why so it was fun to see your Theo. I though that this was very well written but there was one small part that I thought could be worded differently and it was here, "Immediately the Slytherin students put their hands up eagerly" by using the word immediately, I already assume that they are rather eagar as they are doing it right away so instead I would either leave off the eagar, drop immediately and put eagar in front or you could say Immediately the Slytherin students hands shot up, eagar to prove their worth. Other than that small bit though, I thought this was a wonderful read! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: Aww thank you!

You should post it, and tell me, so I can have a read of it too! Not many people have ventured into this area, it would be interesting to see others' thoughts on it! :D

I think I've read so much fanfiction that Theo being nice and sweet is basically canon in my eyes. :p

I'll fix that up soon, thanks for pointing it out! :D

Thanks for the review, and sorry for taking so long to answer it!

HAPPY HOLIDAYS! :D


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