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Review:AlexFan says:
Well damn, that escalated and died quickly. Why James, why! Ugh, SMACK HIM IVY! SMACK HIM GOOD!

Anyway, I think you might be having a slight problem with your paragraphs there because they are insanely long and I know paragraphs aren't that long. Other than that though, great job (although I don't remember her admitting that she liked James).

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. So I'm just going to adress a few of the issues you mentioned.
1. The spacing. I know it's ridiculous. Something happened to my microsoft word so I'm trying to fix it up at the moment.
2. Ivy didn't admit to anything. I think her reaction to his question of 'Why she cared so much?' was sort of enough and quite frankly as the ending of the chapter shows quite clearly, it was very thoughtlessly done on James' part.

:) I hope that clears everything up for you. Thanks again for the review. It's much appreciated.


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