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Review:TimeSeer says:
Excellent chapter!

I loved the confrontation between Albus and James in the Great Hall.

And then Lorelei followed Albus out and apologized about that. I am confused as to why she apologized about that one.

And then James attacked Lorelei. That was terrible because I felt so bad for her.

Anyway please update soon!

Author's Response: Lorelei just wanted Al to know that she was sorry she was causing him so much trouble. She didn't even see the confrontation between the brothers. She had been planning all day how to approach Al about it.

Thanks so much for the review. I disliked writing angry James. Remorseful James is more my cup of tea.


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