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Review:CherryBoom says:
I quite liked the idea of following Tonks's and Remus's line of thoughts. It's intriguing since you can write things without putting the filter on like most fic writers, and your writing has a sense of realness and urgency because of that.

But I must admit that I'm hoping that someday soonish you'll write something longer and more plot oriented just to stretch limits of your skills. =)

The ending had a nice twist in it. I didn't see it coming, but I must admit that I was wondering how you would spin the reason why they were together, since by now I'm pretty familiar with who you prefer to pair with Remus.

I didn't consider it to be very angsty, well compared to your other one-shots. I like the way you write your characters and the fact that they are not very polished persons. Little bit of crudeness actually enhances the overall effect.

It was fun to read it. Happy writing. =)

Author's Response: Be careful what you wish for, is all I'm going to say.

(I'm figuring out a nice little post-apocalyptic short story, which will hopefully exist at one point, so watch this space...)

I'm not usually one for twisty endings, but this one was just something I had to write, so I'm glad you liked it.

Really? I think this one is probably the bleakest I've written; neither Tonks nor Remus have a hope in hell of getting themselves out of that situation. But anyway.
And swearing, of course, is always fun.

Thank you for your review! :)

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