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Review:CherryBoom says:
I must admit that I'm not well versed with all things Dramione, nor do I quite understand what the big fuss about Draco as the ultimate bad boy is, so those things will probably affect my reviewing.

Anyways, I found it interesting that you chose to start this story from the canon moment where Hermione is especially vulnerable because of the way Ron treated her. It's excellent timing for a bad boy to swoop in and cause some trouble, but I do hope you won't underline too much goody two-shoes falls in love with baddie theme. After all Hermy is a strong and clever girl that needs someone who sees her as an equal. =)

Since this chapter is so short, it's pretty difficult to say much about the characters yet. This chapter didn't hint much about the future happenings, but I do hope that you have a good plot in store for them. Even though this was really shortish intro, it would have been nice to get more out of Draco than just sneering. I'm intrigued about his reasons for being in abandoned class room and why he chose to hide himself there. What was he doing that required such actions?

Your writing was smooth and I didn't notice any typos around. I do like that you gave us action right from the start, the chapter just ended bit abruptly. You managed to keep me hooked until the end and since I'm intrigued about Draco's agenda, I'm interested in reading the next chapter as well. =)

Author's Response: I'm trying very hard with this novel not to use any cliche's such as the bad boy/good girl image so i hope that if you do continue reading you will find that i've strayed away from those things. I'm also trying to keep this story as canon as I can make it but still add in the dramione parts! I'm glad that you liked it and that it kept you interested in reading more and hope that you do come back. Thank you for the review!

~Slytherinchica08~

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