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Review:Pretense Of Perfection says:
Yayyy, an update! I'm so happy right now. Please update again soon :)

Oh boy, Caitlyn and her ideas...I can only imagine what the governor, who if I remember correctly is also possessed will think of this one, and do to try and thwart their plan. I think Gerard Butler is perfect for the role of Alex, as I can just see him being all secretly evil.

I'm not sure if I've said this before either, but I love the idea of the cast list. I just might have to steal it. Of course credit will be given, since it's your idea, but I do simply love it. This covers two important points..giving readers a face to the character they're reading about, and it takes away the pressure of the writer to have to include a detailed description of every single person, something that I find is always hard to work into the story correctly and at the appropriate point. Kudos to you!

The only downside is that the chapter is so short. I know it's difficult to figure out where to leave off, but it leaves me wanting more so badly.

Author's Response: Hehe, glad that you enjoyed it.

Yup, he's possessed and yes he will try to thwart their plans without giving himself away. Hehehe, and that's why I picked him.

I'm glad you like it, but it's not my idea. I got the idea from a friend of mine, and I believe I credited her in the first chapter of the previous story for it.

Yeah, I know it's short but it was the natural place for it to end. Thanks for reviewing!


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