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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
Oh I thought this was great! Honestly I think that the length works for this oneshot very much as I completely understand the story and I feel that if you kept going it could end up getting to wordy! You did a great job getting the point across to your readers so they could understand exactly what was going on without you really having to spell it out for us. I loved the look into this moment from Sirius' pov as I've always wondered what he was thinking when he found out, how he knew they died, and how he knew where Peter was! I thought that this was a nice short and sweet oneshot that really captured Sirius during this time! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: Sirius is such a heart breaking character for me :(. I feel like he could have done so much to avoid Azkaban, to prove his innocents... the only reason he didn't is because he really believed himself to be just as guilty as Peter (in my head). bah. Pooor Marauders :(.

I'm so happy you liked this though, and the length because I do worry about that! I just LOVE 500 word one shots, they're an awesome challenge!

Thank you for stopping by ♥


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