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Review:Jchrissy says:
Hi there!

I'm definitely getting more curious about what happened to Tori and why everyone seems so distraught by it. I think your introduction with Albus and the other dorm girls was very nice and opened up the story. And I giggled at Charlie's constant referral to the twins as 'the ducklings' it just kept me giggling.

Rebecca clearly has something up with her.. why is she so crushed about Tori's absence but in the photos she seems to have stood in the background? I love all the questions you're raising in these first few chapters, it's definitely fun to start guessing!

And it does not surprise me that the son of Olive Wood would be very attractive ;). Loved that little addition.

Charlie continues to be a fun narrator. I hope that she'll start getting more comfortable soon, though she really has no way to avoid being around people with class starting the next day :P.

Interesting first start!


Author's Response: I am so sure I replied to this review earlier...odd:)
Anyway, thank you once again for the review, they are always very helpful, and I always appreciate any feedback!
Aw, I'm glad you liked the 'ducklings' bit, and that it gave you a bit of a giggle-sometimes the twins remind me of me and my twin, as...irksome as they can be!
I hope these questions have raised interest-they will of course, all be answred in time.
I'm glad you are enjoying Charlie's narration.

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