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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
Oh yay they have joined the order! This chapter was rather exciting what with them finally finding out about the secret society that they wanted to join and getting to do so. I felt bad for beth though what with her conflict about telling the boys or not telling them about her parents getting divorced. While it seemed like a lot happened, not really much did, but it was enough to keep us interested and the story going. I thought the characterization was well done as always and thought that this was amother very good chapter. I dont have much else to say other than great job!


Author's Response: They have joined the Order! I miss writing these earlier chapters sometimes, when everything was just starting out, brand-new and not nearly as complex as some of the things I'm writing about now. :D Also, as a disclaimer, secrets and lack of communication are two things that this trilogy is basically built around. It can't be any other way, it seems!

It's great to hear, too, that this chapter held your interest, especially knowing (as you pointed out) it wasn't the most action-packed of the bunch. Thanks so much for being willing to come by and review it for me! ♥ I know I say it a lot, but I really do value your opinion, and hearing you've enjoyed another of my chapters always brightens my day.

Hoping to see you back very soon, and thank you again, Erica!

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