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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

I told you that I would hop right on over and review some of your work, which I was intending on doing anyway but hadn't had the time. Can you believe that? Anyway, here I am!
So, it seems that we all have a very interesting way of writing for dearly beloved Albus Potter. Hahaha. I see alot of similarities with your story and mine, especially his nervousness about being in Gryffindor/Slytherin. I really liked what you did with the Sorting as well, I didn't think I'd seen him being put in Ravenclaw before! Nice touch I think. :D
And Rose was in there too with Lucy! They'll be bullied for being all nerdy and such. Hahaha. I'm looking forward to seeing how Albus adapts to being in Ravenclaw and how his other relatives will react to it. Darn Gryffindors. Hahaha.
Anyway, I thought this was a quick and clean way to introduce the characters. There wasn't any heavy detail that would distract from the characters and I really enjoyed that. I tend to go on for like, days when I write a description of something. Sigh. I envy you.
I could have used a bit more detail on what the Ravenclaw dorm looked like but other than that, I'm really happy that I've stopped by! Also, what was with Scorpius taking so long to be dumped in Slytherin? Hinting at something for later perhaps? :3
I'll be back soon, I promise! Trying to get my NG updated before I go back to my girly/angsty stuff. Merlin have mercy on me. T-T
Great read and awesome job! :D
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: *grins* Thanks you so much for reading and reviewing. Good to see you here. Must read some more of your story when I've the chance too, but this is going to be one busy week for me.

Yeah, I'm not great at the visual description, so my stories tend to be pretty sparse on it.

As regards Scorpius, hmm, his personality is going to be revealed pretty slowly as the story continues. But I didn't want him to be a 2-dimensional character. *grins* You're one of the few people to comment on that delay.

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