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Review:Ardeith says:
I finally got a chance to finish this beautiful story. I loved how you roamed so far through the realm of fairytales and then brought it all back to canon and turned it back into a fairytale! Hope that makes sense...

I love how you make Narcissa and Lucius so sympathetic but don't lose sight of their flaws. Such as the way you did here with Narcissa so adamant that Ted not be in any pictures of Andromeda and baby Nymphadora.

And then on the other hand, they do such bad things but they really do love each other and baby Draco. I loved this line:

But there was nothing but love in his eyes when he softly said, “Now you won’t have to do it yourself.”

Author's Response: That makes perfect sense; and furthermore it's wonderful to hear, because that's what I was hoping to achieve. :)

Narcissa and Lucius, much as I love them, are also detestable people. So I had to make readers sympathize with them but also had to retain some of their negative behavior, and set it up so that what happens later in canon is consistent with their characterizations right now.

Thank you, so much, for reading this entire story and for reviewing it. I'm very appreciative that you took the time to do so. :)

- Sarah

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