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Review:Ardeith says:
So this week I'm the first to review! I was so proud of Sneth in this chapter! They've come so far in their relationship. I loved them standing up to Dumbledore and trying to keep him from blaming the other and holding hands!

But okay...what is going on with Dumbledore? We know he's going to figure out how to use this relationship, right? Because we know he's not above using people. But he better not hurt Sev or Beth!

And now I know why I love Beth and think she is so real.because this:

"it was true that she worried things to death, but the sole good quality of that trait was that, more often than not, her fretting never came to fruition." totally me! And the sole good thing about when the fretting comes to fruition is that you've mentally practiced dealing with it. I know...small consolation for Beth and for me. :-)

And right now Beth and Sirius are the Secret Keepers.when will the switch to Peter happen? I hope Dumbledore doesn't switch Beth out because of Sneth? She would never forgive herself! Don't do that to her!!

Author's Response: You are the first to review this week! I can't even tell you how excited I was to post this chapter, mostly just for Severus and Beth standing up to Dumbledore -- that's basically the first concrete thing about their relationship ever. Is it bad that they haven't even had their first kiss yet? I sorely hope not...

And as far as Dumbledore is concerned: He can be VERY scary sometimes! There are a couple of canon instances when I was pretty scared of him, not going to lie.

I think a lot of Beth's qualities (namely the excessive worrying) are very me, and maybe that's why they come across as real to you -- because they are real traits, at least in me! But whatever it is, I'm glad to have gotten that realism across. :3

Ah, everything about the Secret Keeper role will be played out in due time. I've got things in store, never fear! ♥ I literally cannot wait for you to read the rest of this book! Thank you so much for your continually lovely reviews, Ardeith!!

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