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Review:Jchrissy says:
Hi darling!

Oh my gosh. A Percy humor fluffy? Thank you for pointing me in the direction of this!

I don't LOVE Percy (not.. I don't love YOUR Percy, I mean he's one of those characters I've never been crazy about). And that's mainly because part of me will always wish it was him instead of Fred. But you've really kept him the same Percy, and made me feel a bit warmer to him in this. His complete inability to see what's happening with the Barista is so funny. And he is so positive he's right! That's the best thing in my opinion you did to really seal his character for me. Every single fact points to date, and he is so sure that it isn't. He even brings poor Ginny into it!

Audrey as good as proves it's a date the second she says that she fancies his jumper. You've told us earlier that he had to change into an ill fitting one of Arthur's, so we know it can't be an awesome outfit choice, making it clear that she's complimenting it just to be nice. And why do girls lie just to be nice? Because they like someone! Come on, Perc. Get it get with it.

Okay. I feel awkward. Eating pie in silence, though I'm sure it wasn't too awkward, just made me feel awkward in a really funny way. I loved it. And the fact that he clearly has a check sheet for annoyances... I have a feeling that Audrey could begin to do any of those though and it wouldn't matter because poor Percy is smitten with her.

I really can't say much about this in terms of CC. Or.. err.. anything. It's just what it should be. It made me giggle, feel fluffy, gave me a new idea of what Audrey could be.. and despite it being humor you still kept everyone in character. It was the kind of humor that is based on who the person is, like if this was a movie it would be Knocked up, or Hangover type of humor and not Napoleon Dynamite type. Which is really a huge compliment.

I loved how by the end of it, Percy was ready to admit to himself (after told by Audrey of course) that it was a date. I also love that he's going to edit up the story just a bit for his brothers..

Thanks for making my day a little bit brighter with your awesome stories, m'dear ♥

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