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Okay. I know you finished writing this long ago and I'm reading it too late, though I was meaning to read this for a long while, but I wanted to tell you how much I liked this. =]

Well, many people insert a female member in the marauders, but Beth is more original and interesting. I always thought that someone must've liked Severus after all. =] Oh and Beth Bridger is a pretty name!

The descriptions of James's house are just awesome and Sirius seemed believable. But just one doubt- if Sirius has his own place and is off age, then why Beth isn't?? Just a simple queer, you know. :)

Anyway, it's a lovely opening chapter!

~Ashwini

Author's Response: The first paragraph of this review really just made my day, I hope you know. :) I'm so honored that this story was on your to-read list, and I'm very excited you've dropped by now for the first chapter -- I'm very much looking forward to hearing what you think of it!

I don't mind cliches -- reading or writing them -- if they're done well, and so I'm very pleased that you think Beth's original (and that she has a pretty name)! I've become very attached to her in the year and a half I've been writing her story, which is, I suppose, to be expected. And I agree very much with you: Someone must have in fact liked Severus!

That is a very good question, but it has an answer. :3 Sirius got his own place right at 17 with the gold he got from his Uncle Alphard; Beth, although 17 as well, is still living with her parents until she graduates from Hogwarts. Sirius is just headstrong and independent!

Thank you so much for this review. It was fantastic to see you'd dropped by! ♥ Here's hoping to hear from you again very soon!


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