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Review:AlexFan says:
Hello, hello! I'm the first review, yay!

First, I'd like to say that this chapter is really well written and even though the whole "I hate James Potter" thing is a bit over-done and cliche, I love it all the same.

The thing that I loved about this is that instead of going on for maybe three or four chapters about how much the character hates James and then FINALLY telling us WHY the character hates James: you get right into it.

You can tell that Valeria really does dislike James by her reactions and it isn't silly anger over stupid things. I like that. Usually, in fanfictions, the female heroine is just silly and petty.

Grammatically, there were only a few iffies here and there but they were mainly just missing words. Otherwise, it was a really well done chapter.

Good job by keeping us readers (or, at least me) wondering on Valeria and Jane's argument. I wonder what they're arguing about and I hope that I get to find out soon.

Goob job on the first chapter, I can't wait to see more!

Author's Response: Hello!

Yeah, I'm aware of the cliche. Normally I stray from the storyline where the main heroine hates the guy, but this idea just couldn't get out of my head so I had to write it down, and wouldn't you know it, I actually liked it enough to post it here.

Valeria definitely dislikes James for who he is and his actions, and not for some silly thing. She's pretty tolerant to arrogant and strange people, but James made it all personal and now she's out to get him.

As for the grammar, I expected to have mistakes here and there. English is not my first language so.. I need to get a beta soon.

As for Jane and Valeria, you'll learn soon enough. Thanks for reviewing, it means so much, especially from you. I love It Happened Accidentally.

Hope you keep reading and leaving this amazing reviews!

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